Murder for Dinner Post Mortem

In late summer this year, I finished my latest project - an interactive murder story, a "whodunit". It was my first attempt at creating a story based engine and my first attempt at working with family members for any large project - my mom wrote the story and my sister did the character models. It was a monstrously complex project at first - I created a level editor, learned how to animate, struggled with multithreading and sound. It was a lot - A LOT - of work.

I'm content with the result, but in retrospect, there are a million things about gameplay, game design, and story telling to take to the next project.

GOOD STUFF

1. Learning how to tell a compelling story - it's not as simple or intuitive as it may seem. I asked my mom if she'd be interested in getting involved - she's well read, has written before, and has a great knack for this kinds of puzzlers. I agreed to help her along in making the conversion to a video game story. It turns out, I had no idea how to tell an interactive tale :) So why is this in the "Good Stuff" category? Because I'm proud of the tale she came up with - the interesting characters, the quality backstories, and the tight, twisty flow of the story. I'm not proud of how it was conveyed in game, but that's my responsibility - I've learned how to balance it, how much more interactive is needed, how much side information is necessary to give a living feel to the world. And let me tell you: it is tons.
2. The level editor and engine. I started with the Nine engine for graphics and Bepu for physics - both wonderful open source products. While Nine started wonderfully, it ended up being stripped near the end due to complications (I intend to revisit it, thanks to their continued work on it and really solid design); Bepu almost was taken out due to issues I had with my implementation of the character model, but remained and has been wonderful since.The level editor contains a text management screen, animation cues, a simple scene graph, distinct bound and drawing models, event triggers such as text/animation/level loading/sound/gamestate/etc. It's undergoing many revisions, but has been a great foundation.
3. Learning more about the restrictions in pushing pixels to the screen (for me at least). I learned what a good low poly model can be, how a normal map is made (even if they never made it in), how to animate models, how to do complicated multimaterial maps, and so much more. It's been great use in knocking out samples for the next project.

BAD STUFF

1. Sales. This was my fault - I tried to price it at 240 points initially, thinking that the amount of work I put into it directly correlated to the value of the prodct. Sadly, as the graph at the bottom shows, until I changed it to 80 points, it sold horribly. Really horribly. In the Microsoft Indie world, the first week is the far and away the most valuable and I blew it with an overpriced game. 
2. Reviews. Well, mostly one review - that was the first one out and I'll be honest, after almost a year of work and testing, it kind of crushed me. It was a good, honest review, if blunt, and I appreciate it, but it was a pill to swallow. Other reviews have been kinder, and that's been a bit of a help, but I was looking to really create a game that people would love and realizing how tough it can be - and then hearing it - was a blow.
3. Sounds. While Zach Parrish's music has continued to be incredible, not only did a teeny sound bank affect the final result, but it also was and still is a nightmare of code glitches.
4. Animations - too few, too simple. This was due to my time restrictions and trying to do it all on my own (anyone interested in doing graphics work for the next game? Let me know!). It was mostly do to my needing to keep characters mostly stationary, but it dried out the already still game world.
5. Converting solid source material to a game - making a good short story into a video game needs a LOT more massaging, tweaking, content, and vibrancy than I was aware of.

OVERALL
I'm glad the final product was done, and that some folks seem to genuinely enjoy it. There is a lot to improve upon in the storytelling department, from the environment to the dialogue, but that's for next time!

I'm working on concepts for the next one - another story, another world, and hopefully better :) If you've had a good or bad experience with it, let me know! I'd love your feedback.

Below: the initial version of the level editor, showing object bounding boxes.

Below: sales. Notice the strong drop in the two weeks at 240 points, losing the best time on the market (the first week). Once dropped to 80 points, sales jumped.